Jasee
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Legend
I own you
Posts: 23
Hero or Villain: Hero
Marriage: Nobody seems to want me ;-;
Element: Lightning
City: New Haven
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Satori
Oct 20, 2013 10:58:22 GMT -5
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Post by Jasee on Oct 20, 2013 10:58:22 GMT -5
Name: Satori Size/Weight: 10" handle, 23" blade/ 2.0lbs Appearance: It is made from a special, lightweight steel. It's blade so shiny you can see yourself in it. It has a 10" Blue handle and a thin steel blade with what seems like a lightning bolt carved in its base.
What makes it special: Can only be held by certain people deemed worthy by the gods who created it. Very lightweight and sharp.
Owner: Jason Hartman
History: Constructed by the gods of thunder and lightning, given to White Dragon, a famous and powerful warrior from long ago. Assisted WD in many battles before his death.
Now in the hands of Jason Hartman, after his ancestor White Dragon came to him In a dream and showed him where to find it.
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Alchaea
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Annoyance
An acorn by any other name would taste as bad
Posts: 697,037
Hero or Villain: Hero
Marriage: the legal or spiritual romantic union between two or more parties
Element: None
City: Delmont
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Satori
Oct 20, 2013 11:58:35 GMT -5
Post by Alchaea on Oct 20, 2013 11:58:35 GMT -5
Your character's weakness is that he's not physically strong without the lightning cloak. Giving him a sword that increases his strength undoes that completely. Remove that, and it's perfect.
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Jasee
Administrator
Legend
I own you
Posts: 23
Hero or Villain: Hero
Marriage: Nobody seems to want me ;-;
Element: Lightning
City: New Haven
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Satori
Oct 20, 2013 12:20:05 GMT -5
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Post by Jasee on Oct 20, 2013 12:20:05 GMT -5
Done
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Alchaea
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Annoyance
An acorn by any other name would taste as bad
Posts: 697,037
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Marriage: the legal or spiritual romantic union between two or more parties
Element: None
City: Delmont
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Satori
Oct 20, 2013 12:36:01 GMT -5
Post by Alchaea on Oct 20, 2013 12:36:01 GMT -5
You could have left in the bit about helping out your lightning. You can still add it in, if you want it. Either way: Approved.
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JJoker
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Satori
Oct 20, 2013 23:03:45 GMT -5
Post by JJoker on Oct 20, 2013 23:03:45 GMT -5
I approve
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